IOPs

If any of you need help with your IOP over Christmas, please do not hesitate to contact me, wither on here or my BIS email address. Your IOPs should be pretty much ready to go by the time we come back to school.

Ezra, are you aware that the blog video contains several members of your family gazing into the webcam?

Well done with all your hard work this term chaps. Please think/ plan/ work on your IOPs over Christmas.

Have a restful break though.

Mr Pollicutt

Marking my IOP

A-3
B-4
C-5
D-3

How i can improve

• Analyse more on the effects of literary features
• To improve my structure of my IOP I could next time refer back to the thesis statement that I had in my introduction.
• My presentation should be more convincing
• I didn’t really have a precise and cosies speech
• I didn’t have much critical analysis


My IOP questions

Paul Marshall
1. Because of Paul Marshall's high class, what characteristics has he received?
2. How has Paul Marshall's dialogue affected his characteristics?
3. What characteristics has Paul Marshall have, that made him seem so innocent by the other characters?


Cecilia
1. To what extent is Cecilia responsible?
2. To what extent is Cecilia mature?
3. What characteristics has Cecilia received from domestic space?


Briony
1. For what reason does Briony want to receive atonement?
2. What characteristics has Briony received from being a narrator?
3. To what extent is Briony mature?