Comments on my IOP

Comments on my IOP

Criterion A: I think I had a lot of connection back to the Edwardian idea, where masculinity was dominance and how the genders were being reversed. I had very extensive quotations to prove my points

Criterion B: I believe I have put a lot of personal though into this IOP, many of the sentences later on starts with “I think” and “I believe” which emphasis my personal view on the specific topic. I also analyze literary techniques that were shown in the quotations I choose as a bonus.

Criterion C: I think I fell down a bit on structure, but I tried my best to make my structure clear and well-built by introducing clearly at the start of each new section. I also had a clear introduction and conclusion to initiate and end the flow of the IOP.

Criterion D: Most of the language I choose to use in the IOP was quite complex and had a flourishing element to them; which helped boost the flow of the IOP in general.